ABOUT THE BOOK
a fondness for the colour green, Charlie Baylis. Available here. Published by Broken Sleep Books.
MICROREVIEW BY JAYD GREEN
From the outset, a fondness for the colour green offers a bright glittering kaleidoscope to the reader. The poems oscillate between a deep frustration and a willing silliness. The page is not serious, and few are above the laceration of character contained in this collection. Many of the poems operate on a claw machine-like structure: but instead of a bug-eyed neon plush cat, the prize is a poet, film or other piece of media for the reader to add to their treasure.
between you & me sean bonney
i’ve had enough of this shit
nothing everyone & nobody
the city is killing me
the city hates my poetry
the city is a fucking nightmare
dystopia
The constancy of references to poets and media figures can become alienating, like the speaker and the poem are whispering together about a secret the reader doesn’t know. Perhaps this reveals more about the reader. At times, the poems take on the mode of chattering to a reflection in the mirror: nonsensical, fleeting and yet feeling like something of great importance is happening every moment. This, along with the free-falling conversational tone, displays one of the returning themes of the collection: a swinging between connection and disconnect with people.
Curiosity and avoidance spiral throughout many of the poems, with a somewhat ambivalent response to the reader’s presence. The ‘Jenny’ poems are incredibly playful – illuminating the comedic touch of the rest of the collection – and provide a light reprieve from some of the blunt language of a hard truth you aren’t quite ready to hear.
i’m so sorry i didn’t quite catch your name
it sounded like charlie boredshitless
small cities in belgium

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